Bill Waters ~~ Haiku

Haiku + Tanka, Haibun, Rengay, & More

Two on spring

young pear tree —

just old enough

to blossom


one after another

the water lilies


Published in Akitsu Quarterly: Spring 2018 (, 3/2018.

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By Bill Waters (poem) and Robin White (Photo)

Published in Vines (, 3/2/18.

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On Jeff Streeby’s haibun book Wile

Jeff Streeby, Wile: Sketches from Nature, Great Falls, MT: Buttonhole Press, 2017, 48pp. Suggested donation: $15 for limited print edition. Free e-book also available. Both can be obtained at Jeff Streeby’s Website.

Wile, a collection of haibun by poet Jeff Streeby, contains 27 short pieces that run a page or two each — concentrated, but not abbreviated. Each haibun tells a complete little story, a window into a man’s life that has been lived in close contact with nature (and human nature).

Trapping is the main thread that runs through this book, and the terrain spans the once-Wild West and reaches up into Alaska. By the end of Wile, readers will know a good deal about types of traps — blind set, flat set, walk-through, step-down, castor mound, and others — and how to lay them, as well as something of the animals who meet their ends there. Readers will gain insights into the ways of coyote, bobcat, fox, raccoon, mink, muskrat, and beaver.

The acts of trapping in the book, whether for wildlife management or pelts, exhibit no malice but do display plenty of cold cunning. Prey is viewed with detachment and a certain grim humor, and the scenes the author sketches, whether majestic or intimate, use a measure of grittiness both to dull the edge of beauty and to polish it. But the descriptions are neither grisly nor gratuitous; this is artful writing, not a horror show.

Trapping animals is only half the story, though. Trap-related haibun alternate with a variety of other experiences: visits to a 19th-century pioneer farm site in Iowa and an overgrown riverside holding in Michigan, driving a big rig through flash floods and blizzards, observing winter in Potawotamie country and spring in the land of the Ottawa, and acting as a bouncer at a cowboy bar, to name a few.

Wile, then, is partly a naturalist’s manual, a dispossessed cowboy’s memoir, and a love letter to nature — for example, this lyrical depiction of a sunrise in spring:

. . . these veils of cool fog wearing thin, tattering, the dew beading on the dogwood, the fox sedge, the winterberry. A profusion of fragrances drawing out the early bees who hum now among the alexanders and the meadow rue. A red squirrel chittering in the top of the one black walnut tree.

Or this passage, from a different daybreak:

My Banty rooster from his perch in the chicken coop is calling the sun up out of the dark again. In the next breath, he will praise himself according to his excellent greatness for the daily success of this most mighty act. With the same song, different verse, two strutting turkey toms chant his descant from the brush down by the river.

Like his prose, many of the author’s haiku also capture the wonder of the natural world. They range from the musical (using assonance, consonance, and internal rhyme) . . .

The willow killer . . .
bargello of yellow leaves
decks the Pere Marquette

. . . to the strongly sensory . . .

Sweetgrass, juniper,
sage and pine, black cottonwood—
spring’s fragrant resins.

. . . to the outright magical:

Whitetail season . . .
between one breath and the next
a buck in the clearing

Time spent with this intriguing collection of haibun is like a visit with a fascinating, somewhat world-weary uncle who has lived close to the land he loves and is as contemplative as he is knowledgeable.

Published in Haibun Today: A Haibun and Tanka-Prose Journal (, 3/1/18.

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By Bill Waters (poem) and Paula Dawn Lietz (Photo)


Published in Daily Haiga (, 2/28/18.

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NaHaiWriMo 2018: button jewelry

mother and daughter

and buttons and seed beads and string . . .

button jewelry

NaHaiWriMo 2/28 prompt = button jewelry.

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NaHaiWriMo 2018: rainbow jello

room for everyone

at the children’s table . . .

rainbow jello

NaHaiWriMo 2/27 prompt = rainbow jello.

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NaHaiWriMo 2018: homemade soup

feed a fever . . .

another bowl

of homemade soup

NaHaiWriMo 2/26 prompt = homemade soup.

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NaHaiWriMo 2018: dressing up

more funerals now

than weddings . . .

this old suit

NaHaiWriMo 2/25 prompt = dressing up.

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NaHaiWriMo 2018: hot-water bottle

Mum’s Warning after Burst Hot-Water Bottle Scalds Her Bum

Mum’s scalded bum!
she arrives at the ER
in a Star Wars robe

Of course a painful injury is nothing to laugh at, but the patient herself said, “I know it’s not funny now but it will be. I am just absolutely mortified that this whole thing could have been avoided.” (

NaHaiWriMo 2/24 prompt = hot-water bottle.

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NaHaiWriMo 2018: raspberry, orange, pumpkin, lime, coffee, chocolate, or cherry chiffon pie

pie-eating contest —

I win first place

in my dream

NaHaiWriMo 2/23 prompt = raspberry, orange, pumpkin, lime, coffee, chocolate, or cherry chiffon pie.

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