Bill Waters ~~ Haiku

Haiku + Tanka, Haibun, Rengay, Shahai, & More

12 Dec 2016
3 Comments

Two on winter

standing

in the cold canal,

cattails

 

sifting down

into drifts . . .

winter silence

Published in Akitsu Quarterly: Winter 2016 (http://www.wildgraces.com/Akitsu-Quarterly.html), 12/7/16.

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3 thoughts on “Two on winter”

  1. Gary Waters on said:

    We love it, Bill!
    Keep up the good work.

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  2. Mary Kendall on said:

    “Sifting down” has such lovely imagery. The sensation of sifting (as with powdered sugar) and the silence that snow really does bring settling into drifts…just gorgeous images in only SIX words.

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