Bill Waters ~~ Haiku

Haiku + Tanka, Haibun, Rengay, Shahai, & More

Two senryu

school days . . .
no romance
in straight-As
 
turn of the tide . . .
pulled by the current
of my thoughts

Published in Prune Juice: A Journal of Senryu, Kyoka, Haibun, and Haiga (no. 22), page 122 (https://prunejuice.files.wordpress.com/2017/07/pj-22-pdf1.pdf), 7/1/17.

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One thought on “Two senryu

  1. Gary Waters on said:

    I understood the first one, but that struck me as a kind of negative metaphor.
    The second one was fantastic!

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